PaintChat45

[edit2//] I've just added this picture to a mousepad in me and 's shop!!
It's here if you want to see it (or possibly buy it )---> [link]
Yeh - I made up a nice little cornball story in less than five minutes to go along with it XD hahah -aren't I just so original >o> ~LOL
Anywho, I think it may be a slightly, quite cheasy mousepad layout, so tell me what I can do to make it better
- the critique has been increased to advanced only for the mousepad commenting, and I'd like advice on the (yesh, very simplistic) background. I have no problem with the bg being so simple, I'm just not sure about how it's all layed out.
Oh! And if you have any other text you think I should put on there, let me know - note me if you have to but I really want some feedback on this one.
Also note me if you have any other things you want to see in the shop [//2edit]



yeh - I was trying a bit of style - but it ended up just being my same old style, except it's kind of a full piece and it's very much more detailed than usual XD LOL


I dunno how long it took, but and were there so it was fun ^^
My graph tab was junking this one - lines don't finish when they're s'pposed to.


[edit//]Still not completely sure if it was a successful experiment. Tell me what you think please! ToT;; [//edit]